A short but Shocking Ghost story :O
Be Afraid. Be Very Afraid.
As usual, I was sitting in my room and browsing the net. It was around 11:45 PM in the night and am usually awake at that time. I like the silence of the night. And the stillness. And the darkness.
But this night was unusually silent. And still. And dark. I could feel the stillness within me. Around me.
Though the computer was connected to the net, my thoughts were somewhere else. Somewhere far away, somewhere deep, somewhere…
Suddenly, the net gets disconnected. For no reason. But, that happens. I just need to wait for sometime before it gets reconnected. It’s silent around and it’s the night. I am at peace with myself during this time, usually. So, no problem.
I turn around to see what else I could do. There was a mirror in one corner of my room. As I approach it, the lights go off. The current gets cut! Ah, the EB department. I fire them in my mind and light a candle.
Oh, the candle light. It hurts my eyes. I hate fire. Anyway, got to live with it for today.
All the stillness of that night was replaced by some sound just outside my house. Someone was coming. I check the time, it’s almost 12 AM in the mid night. Who could it be? Visitors don’t come in at this time.
There is some sound and the front door lock is opened. I could hear it.
Oh my God! Could it be a thief opening the door with a set of duplicate keys? But wait, there’s another door. This one has an electronic lock. Difficult to break.
Another minute passes. The second lock is also opened. Was it broken? No. It was just smoothly opened. Someone had the duplicate keys to our house!
I stood frozen in my room. I didn’t know what to do. Do I shout and wake up the neighbors, call the police with my cell phone? The candle light goes away too.
There is only me in this house. And a candle without light. And fear. And darkness.
One person opens the door of my room. He is almost my height. But it’s too dark to see who it is.
Just in that moment, the power comes back. I am just five feet away from that person. I can see him clearly now.
He’s wearing the same shirt as mine. The same trousers, as well. Wait a minute, he looks just like me! My God, He is Me!!
We stare at each other in disbelief and shock. Two people just like each other. In the same house. There were no words. Only silence. And my favorite stillness.
My family members gather behind him and all of them look at me strangely. How can I tell them that he was a ghost? Won’t they be shocked?
The candle falls down. I bend down to take it, and what do I see? I have no legs! But the other person standing in the opposite, has legs!
That means?
Yes. I was the ghost!
I show them my real figure. Which is,
This:
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And then I Vanish.
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA
😀
Destination Infinity
PS: Before cursing me in your minds, please know that I was inspired by this blog post, written on a similar topic 🙂
lol
nice stroy
good stuff for a movie
copyright it quick otherwise Ram gopal verma will make a movie on this ..
good one D.I.
Hahaha
🙂 🙂 Nowadays I have started enjoying horror stories!
The conclusion was bit funny and I enjoyed your post 🙂
ha ha 😀 Just the way your inspiration unfolded…
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OMG, felt it was little spooky as I proceeded …. but the end was hilarious 🙂
Loved the story 🙂 🙂
and it reminded me of the movie “The Others” starring Nicole Kidman ..
you must watch that movie Rajesh !
watch 6th sense too.. anyway good narration.. continue posting such stories…
Hi
Thanks for stopping by my blog. Scary stuff, this. I wonder if I will sleep tonight. 😎
Good attempt. The ending almost choked me … I was trying not to laugh in office 😀 😛
Huh???????
It works but astonishment, and a little fear.
It ws gud but not vry spooky story keep posting these typ of stories but try to keep lip more horror things in it
hahahahahaha….
Too gd…
realy i enjoy ur post ilove that
soo nice…
stupid
SO NICE STORES
It is a very little story, but starting it is expected more terrible, finally nothing to fear.
very intersting and funny storie ….good staff for movie
@ “The ghost you saw”
Appreciate your twist…. enjoy ur legless travel… 😛
Super joke bro
Hai dear…i scared but enjoyed ur blog…i hope it was the horror expirience in ur life…..
you got me there…pheww!!
im too long at ghost but im just mind ghost storyis 😀
Oh God save me from this rubbish story ……fool no.1
you made fool of ourselves 😀
Exellent
nice story i like the climax
and if u tell ramgopal varma he will make a nice movie with u r story
lol ….i got scared 😮 😉
this story is too pooooooooookkkkkkkkkyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Oh!! u gave me heart attack!!!
i was very scared when i was reading it…..but d nding twisted it all…nyc..keep it up
i am not scared.better luck next time
Super I enjoyed it
Hahha! That was good.
I like how you said this:
“There is only me in this house. And a candle without light. And fear. And darkness.”
Came back again! 🙂
This reminds me of the movie The Others.
good but next time we will make more suspense in your story
Oh god…. thought it was true…post more stories like this
I already got the hint that its a fake ghost story during the onset, as one who sees a ghost doesn’t write like that . LOL, nice though.